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Tommy Said:

find draft, grammar check, and the fourth para is my conclusion and i wrote in alternative term. Please help

We Answered:

u might want to check this sentence: *Pollution in our water, and other effects on human health.
in this sentenec: *Tyrone Hayes, the developmental endocrinologist at the University of California at Berkeley, said that *over-use* of herbicide is directly *effecting*male tadpoles in the laboratory. , i don't think over-use needs a hyphen. and it should be affecting not effecting
in this part: Now *scientist* had investigated organic herbicide, it should be either scientists or a scientist
u should check this sentence: Now scientist had investigated organic herbicide, this organic product is vinegar. i think it should be a period instead of a comma.
in this part: Vinegar does *great job in* killing off weeds without hurting plants, animals and human. it think u should say *a great job of

sorry if i critized too much..... it really a good conclusion
good luck i hope i helped

Christine Said:

H1N1/Vaccines = Global De-population?

We Answered:

Logic dictates that any "vaccine" designed to kill off 2/3 of a population, to be an effective plan, must be implemented globally and simultaneously. If it is done only in one or more countries and their populations begin to suffer adverse consequences, the evil designs of the overpopulation nuts will become obvious.

Pamela Said:

third paragaph, grammar check?

We Answered:

I can see only one paragraph. Aside from this there are several mistakes in the use of English.

Julio Said:

Michael Moore’s SiCKO misses facts.?

We Answered:

I saw SiCKO Fri night and it was pretty amazing. It showed the 9/11 rescue people who were called heroes by Bush and Giuliani but now they need health care from the injuries and problems they got working on ground zero. Why won't America take care of our heroes????? That's the question we need to answer. Also how can every other country like us give everyone health care and why can't we?? We need answers to these questions. See the film!

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