Michelle Said:

can anyone help me edit this essay.?

We Answered:

Is this to be included with papers to allow you to study to be a doctor? If so, it is touching, but much too long and definitely needs cutting & editing (plus spell-check).

It is written from an unusual stance - perhaps it should be written from a current rather than past stance.

If it is the above required essay for acceptance into medicine, please get it edited locally. It's impossible to re-type it here & make any suggested changes.

Good luck.

Allison Said:

Dreams, future and other unexplained phenomenon?

We Answered:

No matter what religion (not including atheism as a religion) have a belief of good and evil and that some people can possess the power or gift to hear spirit or god. I have this gift and frequently converse with the other side. I am not crazy or anything of that nature it just means you are more in tuned and have opened your senses.

The dreams you were having as a child symbolize fear of being alone and loosing your loved ones. i dont believe that a demon or anything in particular is saying "I am going to get you and take away everything you love" that part i believe is your minds way of telling yourself to be prepared for the up coming events. No demon or anything negative would randomly select everyone you love and kill them off.

This is your life lesson. Dont be so reliant or dependent on others. When you hear this voice again dont get scarred just ask it who are you? if you get scarred there are many affirmations and protection prayers you can say. I truly believe this is just your higher self trying to pprepareyou and showing you what is to happen and its your mind making it scary.

I hope this helps and if you have any questions or want more advice feel free to email me at any time :)

ms.kaylamae@hotmail.ccom

Good luck !

Jeffrey Said:

Critique a poem for my school's contest?

We Answered:

Ohh dear, this is lovely!
A very different technique that really makes the poem quite relatable to anyone. Well done.

Lauren Said:

i need help with this?

We Answered:

i have ADHD and am training to be a classroom assistant

and any research which can help children who have the condition is great news cos it means we are one step closer to understanding the condition better

i found nothing to be troubling about it or morally wrong all they are doing is testing a group of people to check what goes on in their brain. if people did not want to take part they would not have done so

Glen Said:

need to know this information about the country CHILE?

We Answered:

a.- Origin not certain, spaniards started using that name but there is no proof of the origin.

b.- The territory is well determined, on the east a huge Andes Mountain Ridge. On the west the Pacific Ocean. South bound Cape Horns & Antartica. Up north a narrow right turn after the Atacama desert (one of the most isolated places on earth), that belongs to Peru.

c.- The flag (similar to the Texas flag). the 5 pointed star symbolizes the State's Power, RED is the blood shredded during the Independence, WHITE the snowy mountain peaks and BLUE the sky.

d.- There is a small portion of indigenous group, maybe 3%

e.- No gold and no glory. Not only it had no precious metal but the spaniards had to endure a 300 year long war to eliminate the indigenous ethnics group.

f.- Pastel de Choclo. Corn pie (very delicious).

g.- My guess is 3

h.- They're the best in south america.

i.- they got everything because geographically is a strit line. Train, buses and airplane.

j.- They got 2 Nobel Price in Literature Gabriela Mistral (poetry 1945) and Pablo Neruda (poetry 1971). In music they have a pianist Claudio Arrau (1903-1991), folk music LOS HUASOS QUINTEROS, Pop-Miriam Hernandez and Rock LOS PRISIONEROS and LA LEY