Velma Said:

Can someone check my essay please? It is due today can U check my grammar and make comments on it please?

We Answered:

It is nice to find kids that actually do their homework and not just post it here for other people to answer. Here are my suggestions and corrections for some simple mistakes that I found. Overall your essay is very well written. Good luck and I hope my suggestions help ;-)

1) 1st paragraph: The article attemps to provide an explanation FOR (instead of "of")

2) The article emphasized the social, cultural and legal aspects of the society and provides relevant information on how these three characteristics can make a different in the sexual health of the public. Use EMPHASIZES to continue in the present tense

3) Same sentence above: Use difference instead of different.

4) The influence of western societies has an impact on new immigrants in European countries, and their behaviors and beliefs have to be adjusted or changed in order to fit in. Here eliminate changed, since it sounds redundant. You want to demonstrate that you know what you're talking about, don't define a word unless it is a complicated one.

5) The Islamic population is one of the most affected by the influence of modernization and the lacking of information or the denial of having a real problem. Here is how I would edit this sentence: The Islamic population is one of the most affected by modernization, lack of information, and denial when it comes to facing problems.

6) The problems and dilemmas that the Islamic community faces change depending on the situation; sexual violence, homosexuality, abstinence, HIV/STD’s, virginity and anything related to sexual behaviors are topics that are not appropriated to be discuss in public.* Again here "problems and dilemmas" is unnecessary, as the words are synonyms. Also change "appropriated" to appropriate, and change "discuss" to discussed.

7) Communication is sometimes a barrier that makes difficult the appropriate health care delivery, not only because of the different languages spoke ( here add spoken).

8) I personally found this article interesting because it presents a different point of view about sexual health, the article emphasized on the social and cultural factors as determinants or at least influential on the diseases that the immigrant Islamic population face in European countries. Here add a period after health. Also use emphasizes and faces.

9) The comparison was kind of weak between Caribbean and Islamic populations. Maybe use somewaht instead of kind?

William Said:

What is the big deal with Obama's health care reform?

We Answered:

It's a complicated issue, but here is why I oppose it, in a nutshell. Obama has said the he wants to create a "government option" to private health insurance. That is, he wants to create a way to buy insurance directly from the government, which he says will be a cheaper alternative to private insurance. He also says that having this "government option" will force private insurance companies to keep their prices low, so that they can continue to compete once that government option becomes available. He also says that it won't be mandatory, and that if you like the insurance you have now, you can just keep it.

The problem is, that Congress wrote a bill that was supposed to lay out all the detail. That's the House Bill (HR-3200) that has stirred everything up. If you read that bill, it will make it difficult or impossible for private insurance companies to compete with this government option. And, in fact, according to that Bill private insurance companies will have to change in 5 years and offer only the kind of insurance that the government says they can offer. Some people, including me, believe that the "government option" is designed to drive all the private insurance companies out of business, and leave the government in total control of health care. I am opposed to that. There are numbers of other issues and problems as well, and the debate continues to evolve, but that is the main issue, in a nutshell.

Miriam Said:

I keep hearing about health benifits of sex. What about masturbation?

We Answered:

I will answer your question with honesty and with tact. First of all, I congratulate you on waiting until marriage before engaging in sexual intercourse. To do so means that you could have a special and deep relationship with only one other for the rest of your life.

Is there a difference between sexual intercourse and masturbation as far as health benefits? Aside from calories burned, not really. And orgasm is considered healthy regardless of the cause be it through intercourse or masturbation. I do suggest, though, that you take the time when masturbating to concentrate on your feelings specifically. What pleases you and what does not? That way, you can share this information with your future wife and hopefully, she may share the same with you. Just don't beat yourself up and I applaud you for making the decision that you have made.

Bessie Said:

Texas Only-How do you feel about Child Protective Services?

We Answered:

The laws in Texas make it one of the most difficult states in the United states to termnate a parents rights. Granted some Judges play loose with the laws, but as a whole it is very difficult to terminate a parents rights in Texas. As for counseling children in Texas can receive daily therapy depending on what is called their Service Level. Most children do not need that level of intense counseling. The system is only as good as the individual caseworkes and foster parents working with the parents. As to the privitization of CPS that looks to be prety much dead in the water now.

Nellie Said:

Why did Hillary Clinton kill Universal Health Care?

We Answered:

Because she is not Obama! GO GO GO GO GO OBAMA!!!

Jorge Said:

I'm very curious how, and in which areas,our FINGERNAILS can reveal info. about our general health.Anyone?

We Answered:

I found this, for starters: http://www.healthy.net/scr/healthHint.as…

Or try here http://www.associatedcontent.com/article…