Tyler Said:

can you please proof read the end ofmy essay .....?

We Answered:

Hey all that was super interesting!:)

Theodore Said:

New York Notary Public/Certified Notary Signing Agent?

We Answered:

If you are just a notary and nothing else the pay isn't much. About $20 per document. Usually notaries work in law offices, banks, or places where documents need to be notarized on a regular basis and they offer the service in conjunction with other services. It's easy to become a notary, just apply in your state (usually the secretary of state's office). I'm in Massachusetts, mine was about $60 and it lasts 7 years. You have to get certified in every state. My company did not hire me as a notary and I don't think anyone hires an employee simply as a notary so I don't see where you'd get benefits or health insurance for it. I think you think it's much more complicated then it is. It is not a career.

Shannon Said:

What do you think about this personal statement?

We Answered:

I like the idea of your metaphor in the first paragraph but I had to read it twice to understand what you were saying.

A couple of your sentences seemed to run on a little bit too. That's just my opinion though

Otherwise I'd say it was well done :]

Amber Said:

Going to a new school?

We Answered:

1 hour 20 is a very long time to be commuting, it will tire you out a lot and will be very expensive.
Would you not be leaving most of your friends behind, why dont you do a trial run of the journey in the holidays with your mum to show her where you would be going

Terry Said:

Convince parents on going to a new school?!?

We Answered:

Well, I think you should talk to your parents and explain to them the problems you are having with your current school, and how you think you will do better at this new school. They might be conserned about riding a bus and train with a lot of strangers, and how much it would cost each moring just to get to school. Price is also very important. Discuss how much it is to get there each morning, how much the school costs, and any other additional prices. I think you should try it for a year and if it works out that year keep going until you don't want to.

Chris Said:

Should I do it or not?

We Answered:

I think you should not spend the money to go to a school, just to get a job while in school. Unless you are planning on working in the Medical field as a career. i would suggest just getting a waitress job to work part time and have more time to concentrate on college....Good Luck