Willie Said:

Can someone proof-read my college application essay for OSU?

We Answered:

Pretty good, but stop saying "Ohio State University" or "OSU" so much.

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Marian Said:

Please proofread my resume and cover letter?

We Answered:

Your Answer:
The Manager ADD THIS
Human Resources
Euclid Hospital
18901 Lake Shore Blvd.
Euclid, OH 44119
216.531.9000 WHAT'S THIS?


Human Resources: USE THIS INSTEAD: Dear Sir/Madam

I am very interested in securing a position as an administrative medical assistant in your (medical DELETE) facility. Through my administrative and clinical training at Sanford Brown College, I have gained a valuable understanding of the healthcare enviroment SPELLING

(Also, DELETE) I am very detail-oriented and quality-focused with a successful record of handling difficult assignments AND I am dedicated to upholding the highest standards (of the healthcare industry DELETE). I feel that A POSITION ON your (excellent DELETE) healthcare team will allow me to fully utilize my administrative and clinical skills as I embark (into EMBARK ON NOT INTO) my medical career( to grow both personally and professionally DELETE).

I WOULD VERY MUCH LIKE TO MEET WITH YOU IN PERSON TO (look forward to an interview with you to DELETE) further discuss my education and qualifications AT A TIME CONVENIENT TO YOU (in the near future DELETE). Please contact me at XXX.XXX.XXXX or at the address above. I will follow up with your office (further LATER) in the week to review the status of my application. Thank you for your time and consideration in this matter.

Qualifications (ARE THESE QUALIFICATIONS OR PERSONAL ATTRIBUTES OR SKILLS?)
Professionalism, Confidentiality, Teamwork, Energy Level, Customer Focus, Thoroughness, Decisiveness, Organization, Patient Services, Conflict Resolution, Productivity, Independence, Reporting, Listening, Oral Communication, Written Communication, Language Fluency, Legal Compliance,
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Joel Said:

What type of lawyer should I contact?

We Answered:

You don't need to seek an attorney because you don't have a case. If you went to school for the full two years and completed all your classes you would have your degree, what you did was not complete the last assignment which was the internship. I would go back to the school and see if you can take the internship again. When you did not show back up for the internship they just put you down dropping the class. You should have immediately gone to the school and speak to the admissions counselor or the dean and explained the situation. If you haven't already, that's what I would do if I were you. Good Luck!