Beverly Said:

Should I give my main character a girlfriend?

We Answered:

I would say no girlfriend. Based not only on his personality, but also on his age and profession. I'm not being ageist or profisionist(?) here, but I would say no girlfriend. That might make it awkward...
I like this character a lot. He seems original, but in some places unoriginal. He seems un-cliche and not boring at all and def not 2D. he looks fascinating.
And to make him seem more realistic? Hmm...maybe he's not always obediant. Because that makes him seem almost too perfect.

Cynthia Said:

Do you like the main character in my story?

We Answered:

I think that's a really good character description. I like him, he seems real. He is a good person with realistic problems and quirks. You described your character a lot better than most people do. Good luck with your character and your story!

Sheila Said:

Do you like the main character in my story?

We Answered:

I like how you developed him and even gave him these little habits like writing with only blue pens, I like how he seems real. But in real life I wouldn't get on with the type of person who he seems to be. He seems way too organized for my taste and angry as well as a little uptight (referring to him getting annoyed when people use improper language especially if he curses, that just makes him a bit of a hypocrite), but i guess he has a good side (that is when he jokes around)
But despite my negative feelings towards the character I feel that you've developed him very well and made him seem real which i greatly admire.

Gabriel Said:

Should I give my main character a girlfriend?

We Answered:

Nah. Maybe an infatuation, maybe he thinks he's "in love" with someone, but based on his personality I think he'd be irritated and tense around a girlfriend. Have him pursue someone as a side-plot. I liked him a little, but Zach would be far more likeable if he had a trait that made us want him to succeed. Honesty, a want for good, loyalty, determination, will to succeed, affectionate side, etc. Good luck :)

Felicia Said:

Well...THERES GOOD NEWS, AND BAD NEWS. THE BAD NEWS IS THAT RONNY TURIAF is OFFICIALLY GONE and...?

We Answered:

I will miss Ronny his energy in the bench was truly amazing. But playin up north will get him more playing time and definately more money. So best of luck to him.

And great to hear of Bynum improving so if he is in playin shape by september we should be fully ready by the time the season begins. Although we will still need to work out the chemistry problem but theyll find a way to make it work.

And the Lakers should really try to resign THE MACHINE and dont think theres been much interest for him which should make it easier for us to resign him.